Haiku Only - Page 2

s15driftking · 03-20-2009, 07:13 AM

a round hole opens
the cantelope is ripened
heat and anjoy it

s15driftking · 03-20-2009, 07:18 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by icehog3

That is my unauthorized biography, Paul!

Hogging at the bars
happily slurring stumbles
bedtime for bonzo

M1903A1 · 03-20-2009, 04:35 PM

A difficult call
Should I accept a glass top
Box of Cohibas?

M1903A1 · 03-20-2009, 04:36 PM

White fuzzy and gross
Store owner doesn't know squat
"Ah, it's just plume"

03-20-2009, 04:49 PM

Yesterday it worked.
Today it is not working.
Windows is like that.

Mikey202 · 03-20-2009, 04:56 PM

Friday night
Good smoke and drink
I have a cold

WildBlueSooner · 03-20-2009, 04:59 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mikey202

Friday night
Good smoke and drink
I have a cold

a cold is ok
if youre boozing and smoking
get drunk and pass out

03-20-2009, 05:08 PM

iambic pentameter
need not here apply
just the words to wonder why

webjunkie · 03-21-2009, 02:32 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by hotreds

furuike ya
kawazu tobikomu
mizu no oto

haisei no
kireina uta o
tanoshinda

Smoke curling around
My head like a small halo
Oh cigar divine

icehog3 · 03-21-2009, 02:52 PM

My butt, it itches

No lotion or secret balm

Can relieve it

s15driftking · 03-21-2009, 02:55 PM

the admiral strikes
relief he cannot soon find
furthered itchy crack

Mikey202 · 03-21-2009, 04:13 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by icehog3

My butt, it itches

No lotion or secret balm

Can relieve it

here the crickets

Angels fear to tread

Asylum suicide mission

Starscream · 03-21-2009, 04:20 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by icehog3

I thought Haikus could not have more than three "rah"s?

Five syllables first
Seven syllables second
Five syllables third

Starscream · 03-21-2009, 04:21 PM

The rules of Haiku
Seventeen syllables long
five seven five rule

SeanGAR · 03-21-2009, 05:30 PM

Oh my good gracious
Not another Haiku thread
I'm going to be sick

But I kid, I kid
I kind of like the Haikus
Sort of fun, they are

icehog3 · 03-21-2009, 08:36 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by icehog3

I thought Haikus could not have more than three "rah"s?

Quote:

Originally Posted by andysutherland

Five syllables first
Seven syllables second
Five syllables third

I got that part, Andy...I was just trying I was just trying to clarify the "rah rule".

WildBlueSooner · 03-21-2009, 09:12 PM

Rah Rah Rah
Rah Rah Rah
I broke the Rah Rule

icehog3 · 03-21-2009, 09:20 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by WildBlueSooner

Rah Rah Rah
Rah Rah Rah
I broke the Rah Rule

And the 5-7-5 rule.

WildBlueSooner · 03-21-2009, 09:25 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by icehog3

And the 5-7-5 rule.

I am a dumb ass
a dumb ass ignoramus
I suck at haikus

icehog3 · 03-21-2009, 10:26 PM

Not really too bad
I would admit freely
Better than me

03-20-2009, 07:13 AM	#21
s15driftking Go Browns! Join Date: Nov 2008 First Name: Bobby Location: Columbus Ohio Posts: 2,763 Trading: (16)	Re: Haiku Only a round hole opens the cantelope is ripened heat and anjoy it __________________ diamonds/guns

03-20-2009, 04:35 PM	#23
M1903A1 Have My Own Room Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: 1060 W. Addison Posts: 1,573 Trading: (4)	Re: Haiku Only A difficult call Should I accept a glass top Box of Cohibas? __________________ "It's the cigars that bring us together, but it's the people that cause us to stay."

03-20-2009, 04:36 PM	#24
M1903A1 Have My Own Room Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: 1060 W. Addison Posts: 1,573 Trading: (4)	Re: Haiku Only White fuzzy and gross Store owner doesn't know squat "Ah, it's just plume" __________________ "It's the cigars that bring us together, but it's the people that cause us to stay."

03-20-2009, 04:49 PM	#25
nozero Guest Posts: n/a	Re: Haiku Only Yesterday it worked. Today it is not working. Windows is like that.

03-20-2009, 04:56 PM	#26
Mikey202 Tight Lines !!!! Join Date: Oct 2008 First Name: Mike Location: Clarkesville(Batesville), Georgia Posts: 643 Trading: (6)	Re: Haiku Only Friday night Good smoke and drink I have a cold __________________

03-20-2009, 05:08 PM	#28
nozero Guest Posts: n/a	Re: Haiku Only iambic pentameter need not here apply just the words to wonder why

03-21-2009, 02:52 PM	#30
icehog3 Admiral Douchebag Join Date: Oct 2008 First Name: Tom Location: Clermont, Kentucky Posts: 71,782 Trading: (60)	Re: Haiku Only My butt, it itches No lotion or secret balm Can relieve it __________________ Thanks Dave, Julian, James, Kelly, Peter, Gerry, Dave, Mo, Frank, Týr and Mr. Mark!

03-21-2009, 02:55 PM	#31
s15driftking Go Browns! Join Date: Nov 2008 First Name: Bobby Location: Columbus Ohio Posts: 2,763 Trading: (16)	Re: Haiku Only the admiral strikes relief he cannot soon find furthered itchy crack __________________ diamonds/guns

03-21-2009, 04:21 PM	#34
Starscream Knowhutimean, Vern? Join Date: Oct 2008 First Name: Andy Location: In a little town somewhere in the USA Posts: 10,237 Trading: (4)	Re: Haiku Only The rules of Haiku Seventeen syllables long five seven five rule __________________ Insert quote here.

03-21-2009, 05:30 PM	#35
SeanGAR Crotchety Geezer Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: Radford VA Posts: 911 Trading: (3)	Re: Haiku Only Oh my good gracious Not another Haiku thread I'm going to be sick But I kid, I kid I kind of like the Haikus Sort of fun, they are __________________ How can you have any pudding if you don't eat your meat?

03-21-2009, 09:12 PM	#37
WildBlueSooner I'm nuts for the place Join Date: Feb 2009 First Name: James Location: Lexington, KY Posts: 3,322 Trading: (19)	Re: Haiku Only Rah Rah Rah Rah Rah Rah I broke the Rah Rule __________________ "To dilute the will to win is to destroy the purpose of the game. There is no substitute for victory"-- Douglas MacArthur

03-21-2009, 10:26 PM	#40
icehog3 Admiral Douchebag Join Date: Oct 2008 First Name: Tom Location: Clermont, Kentucky Posts: 71,782 Trading: (60)	Re: Haiku Only Not really too bad I would admit freely Better than me __________________ Thanks Dave, Julian, James, Kelly, Peter, Gerry, Dave, Mo, Frank, Týr and Mr. Mark!