Roxy Painting.. NEED FEEDBACK

It is meant to be stylized... I think that it may be hard to see my intentional lines since I have done so much erasing

I am hoping it turns out half as cool as I see it in my mind...

[Blak Smyth]

Originally Posted by CuteAsh

It is meant to be stylized... I think that it may be hard to see my intentional lines since I have done so much erasing

I am hoping it turns out half as cool as I see it in my mind...

getting much better, the thing that still stands out on the hand is the pointer finger. Not the tip, the rest of the finger seems hooked. The part you can see towards the head of the cigar seems to curve to much IMHO.

Like in this pic, you can't see any of the pointer finger except the tip or in the other pic it is just the tip pointing more towards the viewer than down:


I am trying to be helpfull, if I am not or am coming across as rude that is not my intention.