Re: Could use some help.
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Originally Posted by Emjaysmash
I like the design, but I'll tell you that the paragraphs in the "about me" and "homepage" section need re-writing.
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Agreed.
And get rid of the third person form. Very impersonal and distant. It should be written in the first person. 
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