Cigar Asylum Cigar Forum

Page 2 of 3

Show 50 post(s) from this thread on one page

Cigar Asylum Cigar Forum (http://www.cigarasylum.com/vb/index.php)

- General Discussion (http://www.cigarasylum.com/vb/forumdisplay.php?f=48)

- - Haiku Only (http://www.cigarasylum.com/vb/showthread.php?t=12349)

s15driftking

03-20-2009 07:13 AM

Re: Haiku Only

a round hole opens
the cantelope is ripened
heat and anjoy it

s15driftking

03-20-2009 07:18 AM

Re: Haiku Only

Quote:

Originally Posted by icehog3 (Post 294205)

That is my unauthorized biography, Paul! :r

Hogging at the bars
happily slurring stumbles
bedtime for bonzo

M1903A1

03-20-2009 04:35 PM

Re: Haiku Only

A difficult call
Should I accept a glass top
Box of Cohibas?

M1903A1

03-20-2009 04:36 PM

Re: Haiku Only

White fuzzy and gross
Store owner doesn't know squat
"Ah, it's just plume"

nozero

03-20-2009 04:49 PM

Re: Haiku Only

Yesterday it worked.
Today it is not working.
Windows is like that.

Mikey202

03-20-2009 04:56 PM

Re: Haiku Only

Friday night
Good smoke and drink
I have a cold:(

WildBlueSooner

03-20-2009 04:59 PM

Re: Haiku Only

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mikey202 (Post 296268)

Friday night
Good smoke and drink
I have a cold:(

a cold is ok
if youre boozing and smoking
get drunk and pass out :al

nozero

03-20-2009 05:08 PM

Re: Haiku Only

iambic pentameter
need not here apply
just the words to wonder why

webjunkie

03-21-2009 02:32 PM

Re: Haiku Only

Quote:

Originally Posted by hotreds (Post 294307)

furuike ya
kawazu tobikomu
mizu no oto

haisei no
kireina uta o
tanoshinda

Smoke curling around
My head like a small halo
Oh cigar divine

icehog3

03-21-2009 02:52 PM

Re: Haiku Only

My butt, it itches

No lotion or secret balm

Can relieve it

s15driftking

03-21-2009 02:55 PM

Re: Haiku Only

the admiral strikes
relief he cannot soon find
furthered itchy crack

Mikey202

03-21-2009 04:13 PM

Re: Haiku Only

Quote:

Originally Posted by icehog3 (Post 297294)

My butt, it itches

No lotion or secret balm

Can relieve it

here the crickets

Angels fear to tread

Asylum suicide mission

Starscream

03-21-2009 04:20 PM

Re: Haiku Only

Quote:

Originally Posted by icehog3 (Post 295170)

I thought Haikus could not have more than three "rah"s?

:r

Five syllables first
Seven syllables second
Five syllables third

Starscream

03-21-2009 04:21 PM

Re: Haiku Only

The rules of Haiku
Seventeen syllables long
five seven five rule

SeanGAR

03-21-2009 05:30 PM

Re: Haiku Only

Oh my good gracious
Not another Haiku thread
I'm going to be sick

But I kid, I kid
I kind of like the Haikus
Sort of fun, they are

icehog3

03-21-2009 08:36 PM

Re: Haiku Only

Quote:

Originally Posted by icehog3 (Post 295170)

I thought Haikus could not have more than three "rah"s?

:r

Quote:

Originally Posted by andysutherland (Post 297386)

Five syllables first
Seven syllables second
Five syllables third

I got that part, Andy...I was just trying I was just trying to clarify the "rah rule". ;) :r

WildBlueSooner

03-21-2009 09:12 PM

Re: Haiku Only

Rah Rah Rah
Rah Rah Rah
I broke the Rah Rule :)

icehog3

03-21-2009 09:20 PM

Re: Haiku Only

Quote:

Originally Posted by WildBlueSooner (Post 297624)

Rah Rah Rah
Rah Rah Rah
I broke the Rah Rule :)

And the 5-7-5 rule. ;)

WildBlueSooner

03-21-2009 09:25 PM

Re: Haiku Only

Quote:

Originally Posted by icehog3 (Post 297633)

And the 5-7-5 rule. ;)

I am a dumb ass
a dumb ass ignoramus
I suck at haikus

icehog3

03-21-2009 10:26 PM

Re: Haiku Only

Not really too bad
I would admit freely
Better than me

All times are GMT -6. The time now is 06:05 AM.

Page 2 of 3

Show 50 post(s) from this thread on one page